People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

Nowadays advertisements play a high role for humanity as well as commercial increase measure. In my view, the positive sides of

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outweigh

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side

.

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essay will look at the benefits and drawbacks of

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situation. On the positive

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, in the world exist many profitable things and the advertisement

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try

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provide information which could be essential for people.

Moreover

, commercial can be helpful when the customer desire

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to buy

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buy

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something.

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, in the advertisement always describe product details along with

give

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more opportunities to

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.

In addition

, due to

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commercials

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a lot of social networks are available and

in

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great quality. After all, if the announcements have never existed, many social

medias

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sell their content.

For instance

,

instagram

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Instagram

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, tik tok, youtube and other networks have

general

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a general

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sponsor

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sponsors

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which

support

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them.

In other words

,

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a multitude

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of items

require

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promotion for

further

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.

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, sometimes commercial is set in everywhere,

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of that

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become more annoying and inconvenient. As a matter of fact, the advertisements interrupt

to

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humans to enjoy the video.

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, when the person

want

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figure

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out

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in the video and in the most important part

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out

announcement

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an announcement

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. It should be frustrating.

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,

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illegal commercials become more popular on

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Earth.

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, it can influence

on

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the

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children and lead to backfires.

For instance

,

reputation

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the reputation

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of betting among children has grown in Uzbekistan. In conclusion, the advertisement is the best source for purchase and for

check

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the product.

However

, the announcement has

a

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awful

side

like bets,

criminal

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and others. Advertisements are most definitely a boon to our

side