A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time
this
summertime. He/She has asked for your advice. Dear Mike, How have you been? I hope you and your family are doing well. I'Linking Words
m
glad to hear that you're planning to go Use synonyms
on
camping Change preposition
apply
this
coming Linking Words
summer
. it's my pleasure to give you some guidance in relation to the camping you're planning with. It is really great to know that you will come during the Use synonyms
summer
season, For the reason is that you can enjoy a lot of activities Use synonyms
such
as kayaking in the New Found Linking Words
river
will organize by your fellow campers. I'Capitalize word
River
m
pretty sure you will make lots of friends because based on my experience a lot of peopleUse synonyms
They
are very friendly. They can Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
help you if Linking Words
there're
some unfortunateCorrect your spelling
there are
the
Correct article usage
apply
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
will
occur. Correct pronoun usage
that will
However
, during the Linking Words
summer
you might encounter some wild animals Use synonyms
wondering
around the forest because of the high temperature they experience during the day time so Correct your spelling
wandering
that
they tend to go outside of their shelter, to reduce the heat index they are experiencing during the season. So I suggest getting close to your fellowCorrect word choice
apply
camp mates
and don't go anywhere without someone with you. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to join you, on your camping trip Correct your spelling
campmates
this
Linking Words
summer
, because I need to prepare for my upcoming Licensure examination in the following days. The duration of my examination Use synonyms
takes
3 days so I'Verb problem
is
m
afraid I can't join you. Use synonyms
However
, I can pick you up at the Airport and give you a ride to the camping site. I'Linking Words
m
really excited to see you soon, take care and stay safe. Best regards, John DoeUse synonyms
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.