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In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the clutrues and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, an increasing number of
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people
poople
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people
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about
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how to
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, whether
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 the country where the
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 has caused heated debate. My view is that learning about the
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lifestyles of the
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 is very useful for the person who is learning
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language
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First
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, it is obvious that
clutrues
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cultures
 can help
people
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 to understand a new
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This
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 is because a lot of words came from
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for
long
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 time ago.
Therefore
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 the person who knows what is the meaning behind the
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,
can
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 easier to remember the
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further
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study
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, the lifestyles
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the
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native speakers can help
people
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 to understand the meaning of the
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 in different situations.
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,
people
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 use
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 younger brother or elder brother in English, so
people
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 can know who is the younger kid. But there are 2 different words in Chinese, so
people
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 can understand who is elder and who is
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straight
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way
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.
That is
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 not to say that no one can learn a new
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 well without learning the country. Of course, some
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 have a talent
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 languages and they can easy to learn a new
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 well in a very short time, while some other
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 may spend 3 to 4 years on it and still not
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 at speaking or writing. But there is only a small amount of
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. In summary, I agree
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that if a person can learn about the history of the
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, it will help him a lot to understand the
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 well. Meanwhile,
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 is not necessary for
people
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 to learn a
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, there are some other ways that can
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to
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study
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 a new
language
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.

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