Raising household electricity fees is the most effective solution to the problems associated with power generation and environmental pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective in reducing the environmental pollution caused by power generation?

As the

energy

demand has gradually increased due to the rising

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population

as a result

of that, power generation is expanded and more investment is required to fill the gap between demand, and supply. one of the potential solutions is increasing bills of

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sector

that

ensures

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wise use of electricity. Having said that I totally agree with

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statement. As the majority of power plants are conventional units , which are

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featured

by high harmful emissions ,

as a result

of that they have negative environmental impacts.

Therefore

, increasing prices will be playing an important role because of the fact that it will surely, lower

energy

consumption.

consequently

, reducing gases emission, For ,example if

this

new policy considered and lowered the usage by twenty per cent it would positively contribute

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saving nature from undesirable emissions.

moreover

, reducing the required investment in the generation

sector

.

In addition

, due to the penetration of renewable

sources

, they must be set up to reduce the negative impact of climate change.even though they are not that reliable.

However

, they are being particularly improved

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and featured by no technical difficulties to work with.

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, as the government will rise the prices.there should establish incentives for

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apply renewable

sources

in their house ,

for instance

, Solar panels to sum ,up the two ideas which were explained by myself, renewable

energy

sources

will be a key point in the

energy

sector

in the upcoming years,

moreover

, encouraging people and society to use green

sources

is the crucial part,

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lastly

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climate change is driven strictly, by the usage of

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sector

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