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The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.

The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.
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The following two maps compare the current and
future
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 development plans for the western
road
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area
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 of a
town
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 called Springsby. In a nutshell, the western
road
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area
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 of the
town
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 is planned to be developed in the
future
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,
while
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 retaining the existing developed
areas
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 and creating many more
areas
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.
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, shopping
centers
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centres
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, parking lots, bus stops, and
future
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 park
areas
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 will be reduced.
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 the plan, more commercial
areas
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 will be built in the western
road
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area
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 of the
town
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 in the
future
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, shopping
centers
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centres
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 will be located near the
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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, and additional bus stops will be set up to ease the traffic pressure on everyone. To meet the parking needs of residents will be converted to half of the original park
area
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 for parking. In the
future
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, any part of the western
road
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area
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 of Springsby
Town
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 will be fully utilized for the convenience of the residents.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, road, area, town, areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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