The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.
The following two maps compare the current and
future
development plans for the western road
area
of a town
called Springsby.
In a nutshell, the western road
area
of the town
is planned to be developed in the future
, while
retaining the existing developed areas
and creating many more areas
. For example
, shopping centers
, parking lots, bus stops, and Change the spelling
centres
future
park areas
will be reduced.
According to
the plan, more commercial areas
will be built in the western road
area
of the town
in the future
, shopping centers
will be located near the Change the spelling
centres
neighborhood
, and additional bus stops will be set up to ease the traffic pressure on everyone. To meet the parking needs of residents will be converted to half of the original park Change the spelling
neighbourhood
area
for parking.
In the future
, any part of the western road
area
of Springsby Town
will be fully utilized for the convenience of the residents.Submitted by xinxinchen7777 on
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