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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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As of today, increasing
media
 providers have developed various electronic newspapers or books, which can be easily read on tablets, cellphones and Kindles, and so on. Undoubtedly, all the traditional TV stations, presses or
media
 operators would release news on those platforms
instead
 of upcoming publications. I definitely agree with the reality and the following changes.
First
, e-publications and electronic formats have brought a momentous revolutionary, especially because they are convenient to use by humans.
For instance
, one Kindle, which is developed by Amazon company, can store at least 5 thousand volumes in place of large amounts of physical paper best-sellers. Electronic devices have enough memory to save novels and fiction inside,
also
, they are lightweight products and easy to take.
Secondly
, compared to traditional text works, a series of e-books, e-news or e-magazines can be developed and transferred to different countries as rapidly as possible. Those content do not need shipment anymore. Readers can obtain the information in several minutes over the internet as soon as the press or
media
 publishers.
Although
 interests can be released by electronic
media
 rapidly, traditional publications still have the market share to meet the people who need to read real papers. The papers are not harmful to a person's eyes,
also
, the printing ink used truly affects older humanity's smell as well. Regarding the copyrights, future e-news or e-statements will be paid for, too. Those free edition of papers must have not absorbed their audience because of the precise values of the content. As the forwarding paces, the public will select the proper
media
 they like, but more importantly, traditional
media
 will exist together with new electronic newspapers and paperbacks eventually.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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