rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? – Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There

is no doubt that these days nations are increasingly adopting international cooperation as a principle to help eliminate the challenges that disadvantaged

countries

are facing.

This

paper will investigate different types of

assistances

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that rich

countries

can provide for poor

countries

other than financial aid. Eventually, I will argue why it is important for rich

countries

to diversify the types of

aids

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aid

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provided to the deprived

countries

. In terms of some views, it is important to not limit the types of

assistances

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provided to the disadvantaged

countries

to financial aid only. The main reason provided to support

this

claim is that sometimes poor

countries

suffer from

government

failure. To illustrate, in

countries

where there is a

government

failure, the

government

is unable to allocate adequately the resources in its country.

For example

, in Yemen where there is no reliable

government

, people suffer from poverty, high unemployment rates and high inflation rates.

Therefore

, rich

countries

need to solve the problem of governance, because whatever the amount of money they will provide it will be insufficiently allocated among the different sectors in the society. In

this

particular case, rich

countries

can provide guidance for the

government

.

Also

, a number of developing

countries

lacks

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acquiring new technologies that can help them

in improving

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their living standards,

therefore

rich

countries

can help these

countries

such

as the ones in Africa

with

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providing them with new

agriculture

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technologies since they rely a lot on

the

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agriculture sector as a source for their food supply. In conclusion, poor

countries

are in dire need

for

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improving their infrastructure, because they don’t have

well established

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schools, hospitals and houses.

Therefore

, rich

countries

can help these

countries

in building the capacity of their citizens

as well as

provide them with technical training on how to use the new technologies that can improve their

life

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.