The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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vehicle appeared on British roads in 1888 12 years later everybody has their own

car

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. The crowd should

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alternative transport

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essay will discuss both

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views and give a conclusion. I agree with

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idea because it leads

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to air

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pollution and many diseases.

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Firstlyˌ

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individual

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must reduce

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car

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ownership. Using a

car

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will increase diseases and air pollution. Research conducted by CNN revealed that Cars and other personal vehicles

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not

environmentally-friendly

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the crowd should abandon

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them. They should find alternative vehicles

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ass

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bicycles and public

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buses

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.

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reason is it leads to traffic. Traffic is the biggest problem in

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century. It steals

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time and if individuals untangle that solution they should not

use

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car

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. If everybody uses cars traffic will increase and the community stuck on the road. The solution is

simple

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arrange

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ownership laws and increase

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apply

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the

car

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price. if people can not buy a

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they have to

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transport. It will solve the solution. It will avoid energy consumption.

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, I think people should go

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foot but almost 29 million of person

uses

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a

car

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. It leads to overspending because people can do better things with that money.

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example

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making an investment

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in crypto

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crypto currency

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cryptocurrency

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or other currencies. Research conducted by CNBC revealed that Governments should encourage

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for using alternative ways

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for

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example, individuals can go to the hospital or workplace without using any vehicle. They should not

use

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any vehicle for their health and lifestyle. In conclusion, using

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a busses

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busses

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buses

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or

bicycle

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bicycles

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always

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better

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way than using a

car

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. Because it is less harmful to

environment

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the environment

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