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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, people are more willing to start their own
business
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. It definitely became more popular than in the past. There are a lot of pluses of running your own company, but it can
also
 cause some troubles. I would like to present my point of view below.
Firstly
, starting a
business
 can be really convenient. You can be your own boss,
therefore
, you do not have to follow any orders.You work on your own terms, without
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worrying
worring
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worrying
 about losing a job or getting a promotion.
Moreover
, it is easier to earn money. It is common, that employers
try
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 to keep the most for themselves and they pay their employees less money than they deserve. When you run your
business
, you do not have that problem anymore.
On the other hand
, it can be challenging and stressful as well. In your own
company
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 you are responsible for everything. It is your job to
recruite
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recruit
 people and
pay
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 them salaries. You
also
 have to take care of finances and
business
plan
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. You have to be aware that your mistakes can result in less amount of money and lead to bankruptcy. When you work for someone and you are not satisfied with work conditions, you can change the employer. In your own
business
, you have to deal with crises.
As a result
, you can feel overwhelmed and it can lead to mental issues. A good illustration
for
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 that can be a local dance studio in my family town. The owner had
to
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 many problems with her
business
 and she did not know how to manage, which forced her to close the studio and start
a
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therapy to get rid of depression. To sum up, there are good and bad sides
of
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 starting your own
business
. Personally, I believe, that there are more disadvantages
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 it
,
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 because mental health is significant to me, but I
also
 understand and respect people, who are brave enough to run their own
company
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companies
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.
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