You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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recycle

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recycling

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procedures

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plastic

bottles

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bottles

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thrown

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away into

gabages

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garages

garbage

garbages

, are gathered

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recycling

centers

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, transformed into raw

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, and used to produce new products.

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in the

trush

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and carried to recycling

facories

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factories

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centers

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trushes

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trashes

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whether

wheather

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whether

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, crushed into fractions by

geir

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their

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machienes

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, cleaned

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these

pollets

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pellets

pallets

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pallets

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utilised

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shirts,

penciles

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pencils

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

134 words

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The Greeting

Everyone should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Some people think that the best way to resolve environmental problems is to increase fuel and vehicles’ prices. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?