You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
The diagram illustrates the consecutive
recycle
procedures Replace the word
recycling
of
plastic Change preposition
for
bottles
. Overall, plastic Use synonyms
bottles
, which Use synonyms
thrown
away into Add a missing verb
are thrown
gabages
, are gathered Correct your spelling
garages
garbage
garbages
toward
recycling Change preposition
at
centers
, Change the spelling
centres
then
, transformed into raw Linking Words
materials
, and used to produce new products.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
bottles
in the Use synonyms
trush
-box are collected by the specific trucksCorrect your spelling
trash
,
and carried to recycling Remove the comma
apply
facories
. At recycling Correct your spelling
factories
centers
, Change the spelling
centres
trushes
are sorted by officers in accordance with Correct your spelling
trashes
crushes
Correct your spelling
whether
wheather
they are reusable or not. The reusable Correct your spelling
whether
bottles
are compressed into cube blocks, and Use synonyms
then
, crushed into fractions by Linking Words
geir
-shape Correct your spelling
their
Geir
machienes
. Correct your spelling
machines
Such
tiny fractions are washed in the pool.
Linking Words
Secondly
, cleaned Linking Words
materials
are put into Use synonyms
pellet producing
machines, and Add a hyphen
pellet-producing
then
these Linking Words
pollets
are heated to form raw Correct your spelling
pellets
pallets
materials
.
Use synonyms
Finally
, solid plastic raw Linking Words
materials
made from Use synonyms
pollets
are Correct your spelling
pallets
pellets
Correct your spelling
utilised
utelised
to produce several products Correct your spelling
utilised
such
not only Linking Words
bottles
but Use synonyms
also
shirts, Linking Words
penciles
, and bags.Correct your spelling
pencils
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.