You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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recycle

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procedures

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plastic

bottles

. Overall, plastic

bottles

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thrown

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away into

gabages

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garages

garbage

garbages

, are gathered

toward

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recycling

centers

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then

, transformed into raw

materials

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bottles

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trush

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trash

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and carried to recycling

facories

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factories

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trushes

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whether

wheather

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whether

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bottles

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their

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machines

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machines, and

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these

pollets

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pellets

pallets

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made from

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pallets

pellets

are

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utilised

utelised

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utilised

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shirts,

penciles

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pencils

, and bags.

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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