you would like to invite a friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, invite him to the event explain why you think he would like this event tell h other activities you can do

Dear Tom, Hope

this

letter finds you in great health and mental peace, and everything's OK on your end. What're you up to these days? Long time, no see. I haven't seen you since

last

summer. I'm writing to you to invite you to attend an important football match between Egypt and France.

This

match will be held

week at Cairo Stadium. I'd love it if you could come. Let me

first

tell you that

this

event is so important because the winner will be awarded a golden cup. Actually, not only does

this

match so important for the Egyptian people, but

also

it means a lot France ones.

Lastly

, before I end up my letter, let me tell you about what else we can do. I'll take you on a Nile cruise afterwards,

however

you may not be able to continue from exhaustion. Hope you'll be able to make it. Looking forward to seeing you

then

. Take care of yourself, and till I see you, say hi to your beloved family. Yours, Laila Khaled

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

176 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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