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spending money for charity is a good idea. what is your opinion?

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UNICEF
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 is an international endowment that defends children’s rights. Our school wants to choose one charity to support
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 year. I am convinced that we should choose
UNICEF
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 because it is the most prominent organization run by the United Nations, which was established in 1946 to help heir and mothers worldwide. The main argument for supporting
UNICEF
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 is that heir is at the heart of everything we do.
UNICEF
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 has done more to influence policies to help protect scion. They ensure more of the world’s children are vaccinated, educated, and protected than any other organization. Another argument for donating money to
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 donation is that
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 does a lot of important work to protect kids,
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, right now the struggle is a natural disaster threatening the lives of millions of heir, and in places like Ukraine, Yemen, and Syria children are caught up in violent conflict. They are feeling warfare and disaster in greater numbers than at any time since World War 2.
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 why I believe that
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’s work is necessary. In the chaos of the conflict and disaster, it's
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 important that
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 should provide life-saving food, clean water, medical supplies, and care.
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,
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 has to work with communities to make sure children can continue their education and stay safe from violence and exploitation. In conclusion, my final point is that our fund for
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 year should be
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 because they are working around the world to ensure that every child can get an education and keep learning.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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