Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned andshold not pay tax to the state. Do you agree and disagree?

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Taxes is one of the most important national income in many countries. Some
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believe that saving
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is better than paying
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taxes to the government. I am
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disagree with them that what
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am going to explain in
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People
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should pay
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to the state for many reasons. One of the main reasons that
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money
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is spent on improving
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health sector, education and transport.
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corona
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pandemic
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many countries were suffering because of complex economical
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, other countries
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on
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people
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situation which help them to pass
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period safely. It can be seen that
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that
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paid for taxes
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by fundamental public services
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can not live without.
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paying
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to the community has a serious effect on
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public mental health.
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keeping
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makes
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feel
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, they become less responsible toward society and they do not care
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a lot
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about country safety.
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, If you want to improve the building of your apartment, who will be
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responsible
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that you only or all
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with you in the same building
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So not only the governments are responsible
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progress but
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the whole society, individuals and organisations. In
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conclusion
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, paying
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to the government has a huge positive impact on supporting
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essential
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public services and grow up responsible
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toward
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their community which will benefit you
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the end.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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