The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps illustrate the infrastructure changes of different visitor entertainment.
Overall
, there have been dramatic improvements
such
as a modern pier,
reception
, restaurant, accommodations and swimming area. Footpaths and vehicle tracks were constructed. The square of the
island
stayed constant. The pier was constructed on the south
side
of the
island
which permits access to the
island
by boat. Walking forward there is a
reception
at the centre of the aisle. Accommodation areas were located on the east and west
side
Fix the agreement mistake
sides
show examples
of
reception
. It contains 15 compact houses that form an oval. The restaurant was placed on the north
side
of the
island
. There were manufactured vehicle tracks that begin from the pier, pass the
reception
and lead to the restaurant. Accommodation areas were equipped with footpaths that connect houses with each other. Another pathway was constructed on the west
side
of the
island
that led residents to the beach and modern swimming area.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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