The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The two maps illustrate the infrastructure changes of different visitor entertainment.
Overall
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, there have been dramatic improvements
such
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as a modern pier,
reception
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, restaurant, accommodations and swimming area. Footpaths and vehicle tracks were constructed. The square of the
island
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stayed constant. The pier was constructed on the south
side
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of the
island
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which permits access to the
island
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by boat. Walking forward there is a
reception
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at the centre of the aisle. Accommodation areas were located on the east and west
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side
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sides
show examples
of
reception
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. It contains 15 compact houses that form an oval. The restaurant was placed on the north
side
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of the
island
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. There were manufactured vehicle tracks that begin from the pier, pass the
reception
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and lead to the restaurant. Accommodation areas were equipped with footpaths that connect houses with each other. Another pathway was constructed on the west
side
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of the
island
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that led residents to the beach and modern swimming area.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words reception, island, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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