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you have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who is already knows about that job as well. .Tell what kind of job it is .explain why you applied for this job .ask your friend about the country

#job #friend #country
Dear Sam, I am well here and I wish you and all of your family are well .I am writing
this
 letter to you for telling you about my new job and asking for some information about your experience in
such
 a kind of job and the work process in detail.
To begin
 with,Let you know I applied overseas for a place in a multinational association named star Asia and I got
this
 position in the post of sales manager.You know how important the position is to me.
Moreover
,you had a very good experience on
this
 post
also
 you doing the same position in another association in the same city. After finishing my higher study,I worked in a small company as a sales manager.From
this
 post, I gained very good experience as well.When I found an opportunity in
this
 company I apply immediately because you and I are very good friends and you are in the same country.
Furthermore
,we can meet each other and my financial condition
also
 going in a positive way,that's why I for apply,
this
 job. As you know,I like
this
 country very much to live,tell me about the weather of their and living style.
Moreover
,tell me about the nightlife and about the food . I look forward to hearing from you. With best regards Gobinda
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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