you have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who is already knows about that job as well. .Tell what kind of job it is .explain why you applied for this job .ask your friend about the country

Dear Sam, I am well here and I wish you and all of your family are well .I am writing

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letter to you for telling you about my new job and asking for some information about your experience in

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a kind of job and the work process in detail.

To begin

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with,Let you know I applied overseas for a place in a multinational association named star Asia and I got

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position in the post of sales manager.You know how important the position is to me.

Moreover

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,you had a very good experience on

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post

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you doing the same position in another association in the same city. After finishing my higher study,I worked in a small company as a sales manager.From

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post, I gained very good experience as well.When I found an opportunity in

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company I apply immediately because you and I are very good friends and you are in the same country.

Furthermore

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,we can meet each other and my financial condition

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going in a positive way,that's why I for apply,

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job. As you know,I like

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country very much to live,tell me about the weather of their and living style.

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,tell me about the nightlife and about the food . I look forward to hearing from you. With best regards Gobinda

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Nov 2, 2022

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

215 words

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you have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who is already knows about that job as well. .Tell what kind of job it is .explain why you applied for this job .ask your friend about the country

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter, explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute mention what problems you have encountered with parking what you recommend to solve the problems

The television is good for you. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

Developing the economy will always damage the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?