Recent surveys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reasons for this trend, and what will be the possible outcome from this behavior? Provide examples for your opinion.

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Globalization
Remote work
Political instability
Living conditions
Advancements in technology
Connectivity
Quality of life
Cultural curiosity
Job opportunities
Immigration policies
Barriers to entry
Prosperous nations
Emotional cost
Healthcare
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