Recent surveys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reasons for this trend, and what will be the possible outcome from this behavior? Provide examples for your opinion.

Computers
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technology becoming more and more popular every day. Metamodernism is growing, which is related with help the rapid development of the world, and we must obey
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him, as we accepted
another social revolutions
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. Computers
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us everywhere, even in education. Nowadays, many exams are
taking
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online,
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courses
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self-development in virtual formats. I mean, that people will soon like
this
and we will go into global digitalisation. Of course,
computer
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have large variations
pluses
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and minuses and each of them
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someone
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internet
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someone
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someone
studying,
someone
is scapegrace - and everyone is right, because it is inevitable
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because art is much stronger
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than man. The only thing worth worrying about is that
illusoryness
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illusoriness
illusiveness
can
finally
capture us and we will have to say goodbye to the past and destroy the old world in order to build a new one. The new world will be more attractive and more addictive, it is automatism can kill the concept of “human”
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because the code will decide our fate, not us.
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under control
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system and it can collapse at any moment, and it is really scary.
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  • Globalization
  • Remote work
  • Political instability
  • Living conditions
  • Advancements in technology
  • Connectivity
  • Quality of life
  • Cultural curiosity
  • Job opportunities
  • Immigration policies
  • Barriers to entry
  • Prosperous nations
  • Emotional cost
  • Healthcare
  • Living standards
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