Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities

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I will tell you that once I read an article about

this

, the article said that the majority of male athletes in different sports like soccer, basketball, tennis,

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volleyball

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volleyball

or martial arts

for

example

earn much more

money

than

women

in these same sports but I once saw a video about

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that explained the reason and said that men earn more than

women

in

this

sports because they generate more

money

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on television, live or on different platforms

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the case of Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, Rafael Nadal, Federer or Neymar Jr Now I will talk about the world of music, fashion and cinema I think that

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in music any artist who is recognized worldwide

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is good that they earn a lot of

money

, just like in fashion, perhaps

women

earn more

money

because, as I explained before, in the world of fashion,

women

generate more

money

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in my opinion I think that there should be no salary cap on people who generate a lot of

money

in

this

industry