Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, many people prefer to buy ready-made food rather than
cooking
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cook
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something on their own.
As a result
,
this
kind of product has been spreading around the world. Nowadays, since people work hard for many hours every day , they are not willing to cook something after they finish working and come back home. For
this
reason, they often decide to go to a restaurant with their relatives or friends in the evening.
On the contrary
, in case any person wants to stay with his family at home, he might purchase
covenience
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convenience
foods in the supermarkets or shops he usually goes to. In fact , he can find there a great variety of these types of products including rice , meat , vegetables and
also
fruit . Of course , when people must stay in the workplace, many of them have the habit to eat a sandwich or something else in a pub with their colleagues.
However
, if any person is allowed to have lunch in the same place he works in, he could remain there after he has bought something to eat .
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
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