Rich Countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?

In the
last
decade, many
people
leave their home country for better job opportunities.
This
trend increasing sharply and so many
people
support
this
idea. They believe strange qualified humans will carry their homelands for better education and economy. Their argument is not completely wrong.
However
, in my opinion, employees who are skilled and knowledgeable are not the best option because sometimes it leads to unemployment problems among native ones and high crime rates. The
first
reason is that, whenever alien
people
go to another land, unemployment problems appear among native
people
. No matter how they are talented,
firstly
they work for low payment works.
Therefore
this
kind of individual always finds jobs in other lands.
This
situation leads to several problems
such
as fury toward immigrant
people
and racism.
For instance
,
last
five years European
people
choose racist
people
for their governance.
Moreover
, sometimes protest happened toward individuals who came from other countries. The
second
reason is the increasing crime rates in desirable countries. Due to
lack
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of knowledge, sometimes
immigrants
intervene in crimes. No matter how they are well trained, it nearly
happen
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happens
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especially during their
first
months in strange countries.
For example
, in the UK after
immigrants
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,immigrants
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there are so many car accidents
happened
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. A lot of experts say; ‘’Crash rates are increasing because of the humans who
are
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came from alien soils. They do not know well ride to the right wheel’s cars.’’ Sometimes
this
kind of accident leads to the death of many
people
and due to
this
problem, local
people
hate
immigrants
. All things considered, owing to
crime
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the crime
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rate and unemployment problem among
to
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domestic
people
governments ought to be careful about
immigrants
. If they do not care about their local
people
, racism will rise in the future.
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