Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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nowadays,
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becomes the issue of the century for
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. some
people
think that the ideal
way
to reduce accidents on
city
roads is to reduce the speed limit, but others believe
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way
to work on their
safety
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streets
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should discuss both sides and provide your personal point of view.
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with, some
people
think that
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to reduce
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accident
to give specific speed limits.
Firstly
, automatic cars can
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and
easily
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to control
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less speed on street.
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, if the speed is around 40km, so it easily to
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vehicle
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on roads.
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, I am driving cars with my friend, so it
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to handle the car
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less speed.
Furthermore
, I would like to outline more one impact which can reduce
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by less speed limit on roads. it
easily
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to focus all the angles of
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less speed and it
cause
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the less
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.
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, when I was learning
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car in
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, so I drive the car
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20km which help to look
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side mirrors.
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, some
people
argue that there
are
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way
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to produce
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safety
on
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street
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.
secondly
, engineers
have
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look after the build
such
a speed breaker
to
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safety
on
streets
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.
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, engineers have to plan something while building the
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how can
they
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can give perfect
safety
to
public
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.
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, In Islamabad, after every 2
kilometers
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, they build the speed breaker for
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safety
. Moving
further
,
people
believe that there is best to improve
the
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safety
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city
streets
.
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have to make big
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on road to guide the instructions of driving.
Lastly
, some
people
think that the perfect
way
to control
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accident
on
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city
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is to set the speed limit. other think that they should improve their
safety
ln
city
streets
. In my opinion, the best to improve their
safety
on
city
streets
. because they can make speed
breaker
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after
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every 2
kilometer
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and
big
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billboard
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on street to guide
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the
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safety
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