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Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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nowadays,
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accident
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the accident
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 becomes the issue of the century for
community
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. some
people
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 think that the ideal
way
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 to reduce accidents on
city
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 roads is to reduce the speed limit, but others believe
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that
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that
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better
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a better
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way
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 to work on their
safety
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 on
city
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streets
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this
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 should discuss both sides and provide your personal point of view.
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 with, some
people
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ideal
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way
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 to reduce
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accident
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 to give specific speed limits.
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, automatic cars can
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efficient
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 and
easily
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to control
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in
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 less speed on street.
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, if the speed is around 40km, so it easily to
automatic
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the automatic
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vehicle
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vehicles
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 on roads.
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, I am driving cars with my friend, so it
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 to handle the car
on
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 less speed.
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, I would like to outline more one impact which can reduce
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accident
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accidents
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 by less speed limit on roads. it
easily
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 to focus all the angles of
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 mirror
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 less speed and it
cause
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 the less
accident
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 on
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streets
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the streets
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.
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, when I was learning
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car in
start
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, so I drive the car
on
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 20km which help to look
the
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 side mirrors.
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, some
people
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 argue that there
are
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better
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way
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 to produce
the
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safety
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 on
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city
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a city
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street
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streets
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.
secondly
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, engineers
have
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 look after the build
such
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 a speed breaker
to
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for
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safety
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streets
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the streets
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.
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, engineers have to plan something while building the
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that
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how can
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can give perfect
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 to
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, In Islamabad, after every 2
kilometers
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kilometres
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, they build the speed breaker for
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safety
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. Moving
further
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,
people
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 believe that there is best to improve
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safety
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on
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city
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streets
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.
government
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the government
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 have to make big
billboard
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 on road to guide the instructions of driving.
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, some
people
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 think that the perfect
way
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 to control
the
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apply
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accident
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on
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city
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the city
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 is to set the speed limit. other think that they should improve their
safety
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 ln
city
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streets
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. In my opinion, the best to improve their
safety
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 on
city
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streets
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. because they can make speed
breaker
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after
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apply
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every 2
kilometer
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 and
big
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a big
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billboard
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billboards
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 on street to guide
on
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them on
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the
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apply
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safety
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