Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In the modern period, A number of younger are migrated to their

home

in big

citiescities

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cities cities

to high education or job in

cities

. the trend's

benefits

outweigh the drawbacks.

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should highlight the pros and cons of leaving their homeland.

To begin

with, there are many

benefits

of leaving their

home

in rural

areas

to study Purpose or jobs in

cities

.

Firstly

, young

people

are leaving because they wanted to live better lifestyles in

cities

as compared to a small

town

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.

In other words

, young

people

to avail all the facilities of the big

city

and wanted to live

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better

lifestyle

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.

For instance

, I belong to a village,but I leave my

city

because I can live a better lifestyle. Moving

further

, I would like to outline one more fruitful thing about migrating to

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rural

area

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. young

people

leaving their homes because they get better job opportunities in rural

areas

.

For example

, In Pakistan, 50 % of younger leave their

home

because of better high salaries in rural

areas

.

On the other hand

, there are so many

benefits

, but it does not mean that there are no drawbacks to leaving the

home

.

secondly

, youth effective by homesickness to leave their homeland.

In other words

, young

people

leave their homes,but it is not easy to live alone without their family, so some of the

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home sickness

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. To illustrate, one of my relatives who just recently leave his

home

and start living in the

city

, he already starts missing his family.

moreover

, I would like to outline one more negative impact of leaving their homes for jobs. younger

is

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also

effective by language barriers because it different languages in every

city

.

For example

, My cousin leaves his

home

and migrate to Lahore for high studies, but most of the

people

speak Punjabi in Lahore.

Lastly

,youth are leaving their

home

in rural

areas

for jobs or education in

cities

. the

benefits

outweigh the drawbacks.

such

as younger leave their

home

because of better lifestyles and better job opportunities