It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college. Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter • say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise • explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way • describe what help you need to organise this event

Hi Lokesh, I hope you are doing good. I am writing
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letter to organise a small get-together for our ten-year anniversary in college. I am planning to book a small cafe or banquet hall for our party , which was very famous in our college days. Another reason for
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meet up
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is to recall all our memories and fun times that we left behind in college.
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particular location for our party is perfect for all our friends as it's near everyone's home. At our
meetup
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we can organise some fun games so that all close friends get a chance to indulge in them.
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that, I am thinking of adding a session of five-minute pep talk
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each person can speak about their ongoing life. I just need a small favour from you to make
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party successful. As it's been ten years now , two of our close friends , Ashish and Shubham, recently changed their contact numbers , and I have their old numbers. If you can connect with them, we would be grateful. Waiting for your response on
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. Thanks, Nik

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task
Make the aim clear. Say what to do, why, and what you ask from your friend.
coherence
Link ideas with small links like and, then, so to make the flow smooth.
grammar
Fix small grammar and spelling. Use well, not good; add spaces after commas.
tone
Friendly tone at start and end.
content
Clear plan for the party set up.
purpose
Polite request for help.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

Topic Vocabulary:
  • plan
  • party
  • get-together
  • friends
  • old
  • ten years
  • college
  • place
  • date
  • time
  • invite
  • guest
  • budget
  • money
  • cost
  • food
  • drink
  • cake
  • music
  • talk
  • share
  • memory
  • story
  • photo
  • wall
  • help
  • join
  • come
  • together
  • nice
  • easy
  • small
  • warm
  • soon
  • let me know
  • thanks
  • see you
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