What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras to fight crime?
Nowadays, many organisations or groups of people truly believe that
CCTV
cameras
are quite efficient to fight
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in fighting
crime
while
others think that it is more dangerous. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and try to draw some conclusions. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of utilizing CCTV
technology. One of the primary positives of using CCTV
cameras
is that it
can be used by police officers and security employees to stop crimes, Correct pronoun usage
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is because those devices can give the location of potential the Correct pronoun usage
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crime
. For instance
, if security officers see some attempts or provocations of crime
through their computer or smartphone, which is connected right to the CCTV
cameras
, they could prevent it by going to possible crime
places. Thus
, it is possible that someone won’t be a victim of crime
thanks to the quick action of the police. One of the primary positives of using CCTV
cameras
to deter crimes it
that the recordings could provide concrete evidence to the police. What I mean is that With Correct your spelling
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regard
cameras
might be very dangerous to use especially for ordinary citizens. It
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According to
my friend Ganaa’s experience, IT specialists hacked his
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the
CCTV
devices of his home and office, and he lost many videos of his personal life which is rather terrifying. As a result
, Ganaa had depression and deep anxiety. To draw a conclusion, I want to say that there are both pluses and minuses which can be solved. In spite of the fact that it has some minuses. Personally, I support CCTV
cameras
though it might be risky too. In my opinion, we should not stop using modern staff by avoiding
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion