The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

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The given pie charts introduce the

sell

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sales

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of books by five types of

book

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books

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period

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the period

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from 1972 to 2012.

Overall

, it can be seen that in 1972 the biggest part was taken by others and adult

fiction

in 2012 and all data are given in percentages. It is readily apparent that other, travel and biography significantly went down from 25%,15% and 20% respectively in 1972,

then

20%,18% and 15% in 1992, after that

finally

12%, 10% and 8%

accordingly

. Meanwhile adult

fiction

and

children

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children's

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fiction

considerably increased for a whole time with beginning unlike

other

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the other

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three. Adult

fiction

starts

with

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20% in 1972,

then

slowly climb to 25% in 1992,

eventually

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and eventually

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reaches 45% indicator which takes most of all in 2012. At

one time

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children

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children's

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fiction

begins

also

with 20% in 1972, later it raises slightly to 22% in 1992,

thereafter

indicator achieves 25% with

maximum

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the maximum

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index in 2012.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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