The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012
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sell
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of books by five types of
book
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books
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in
period
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the period
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from 1972 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that in 1972 the biggest part was taken by others and adult
fiction
in 2012 and all data are given in percentages. It is readily apparent that other, travel and biography significantly went down from 25%,15% and 20% respectively in 1972,
then
20%,18% and 15% in 1992, after that
finally
12%, 10% and 8%
accordingly
. Meanwhile adult
fiction
and
children
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children's
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fiction
considerably increased for a whole time with beginning unlike
other
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three. Adult
fiction
starts
with
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at
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20% in 1972,
then
slowly climb to 25% in 1992,
eventually
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and eventually
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reaches 45% indicator which takes most of all in 2012. At
one time
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children
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children's
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fiction
begins
also
with 20% in 1972, later it raises slightly to 22% in 1992,
thereafter
indicator achieves 25% with
maximum
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index in 2012.
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