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in the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in heir area. what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

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Few generations back, The Majority of the population stayed in rural areas where they can know each of them thoroughly about their neighbours .Coming to the present generation, The Majority of the population stays in urban places and is connected to a few folks located nearer to their place.In
this
 essay, I would like to discuss the pros and cons of living in small
towns
.
Firstly
, Coming to the positive side of living in small
towns
 the cost of living is low compared to the
city
 side and
folk
 in
towns
 are more familiar with their neighbours .Interaction between
folk
 is more in
towns
 compared to cities and
also
 children can earn some ethics, values and responsibilities than children in cities. The pollution and environmental conditions are more when it comes to villages it is less polluted and there is a pleasant environment.Farming in
towns
 makes
folk
 have organic foods whereas
city
folk
 are habituated to unhealthy foods. The disadvantages of living in villages compared with the
city
 lifestyle are they have some private spaces to each of them in cities and a Hitech lifestyle , High opportunities for jobs etc. They have needs at places like Hospitals,Schools,Markets ,Malls etc.The kids are developed with modern technology compared to kids in
towns
.They
also
 have the best educational institutes compared to
towns
.Technology wises the
city
folk
 were far better than
towns
. In Conclusion,The advantages and disadvantages are equally distributed for lifestyle in
towns
. Either the government should
also
 develop the
towns
 with hospitals and schools and
also
 educate the
folk
 about upcoming technologies. They should
also
 provide some specific schemes for
towns
 to overcome the cons.
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