Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

These days, all the countries have been upgraded.We use empty spaces in two ways.

Firstly

, planting trees and constructing

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building

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buildings

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.

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this

essay, it will be considered

benefits

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the benefits

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and drawbacks.

Firstly

, planting trees have environmental benefits,

for instance

, if different types of trees are

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in open areas.It will prevent

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air pollution.

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,

plantation

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the plantation

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of thousands of

sapling

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saplings

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unsed

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unused

used

land can reduce the intensity of toxic gases in the atmosphere.

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, recent research

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continuations in metropolitan cities

have

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shown that.

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air quality is not suitable for

inhale

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.

Therefore

, we should increase the green zones to improve. The quality of the gases , which we inhale.

On the other hand

, empty spaces should

building

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more houses . It can create

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view of

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developing

deleloping

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developing

cities.

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, hotels,

accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

. It

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effects

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affects

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the urbanization of the city.

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words

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if building more apartments.It has

beneficial

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for people. Namely , villagers will migrate to the city

also

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and unemployments

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unemployments

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will disappear.

Talking

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evthing

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into consideration, it has both benefits and

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. I personally believe, if we provide more building apartments in the open

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areas

area

ares

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, We will

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also

aslo

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also

save green spaces