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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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These days, all the countries have been upgraded.We use empty spaces in two ways.
Firstly
, planting trees and constructing
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building
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.
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this
 essay, it will be considered
benefits
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the benefits
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 and drawbacks.
Firstly
, planting trees have environmental benefits,
for instance
, if different types of trees are
planned
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planted
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 in open areas.It will prevent
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air pollution.
Thus
,
plantation
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the plantation
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 of thousands of
sapling
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saplings
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unsed
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unused
used
 land can reduce the intensity of toxic gases in the atmosphere.
For instance
, recent research
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 continuations in metropolitan cities
have
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 shown that.
This
 air quality is not suitable for
inhale
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.
Therefore
, we should increase the green zones to improve. The quality of the gases , which we inhale.
On the other hand
, empty spaces should
building
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 more houses . It can create
advanced
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an advanced
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 view of
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developing
deleloping
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developing
 cities.
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, hotels,
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
. It
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effects
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affects
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 the urbanization of the city.
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words
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 if building more apartments.It has
beneficial
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 for people. Namely , villagers will migrate to the city
also
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unemployments
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 will disappear.
Talking
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evthing
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everything
thing
 into consideration, it has both benefits and
negative
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negatives
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. I personally believe, if we provide more building apartments in the open
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areas
area
ares
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areas
, We will
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also
aslo
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also
 save green spaces
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