many people work from home using modern technology today. Give your opinion.

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Modern technology has affected all
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of our
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. Today, we can see numerous
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from their homes
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workplaces
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work places
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. From my
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,
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is more comfortable, it can cause different
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disorders, but with some
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could
cauld
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be a great job. It can be seen that new technology has
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wide spread around the world because
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role it plays to facilitate
people
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's
life
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. Many
people
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work
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from
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now in order to save money,time and effort. The huge effect that technology applied
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public
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can be seen through corona
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pandemic
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pandemic
. During
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period, working from
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continuous
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increasing until now.
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, teachers from schools started online courses to allow students to continue their classes.
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to that online working makes you save additional fees like transport fees. So
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has different positive advantages.
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,
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type of
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affects
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people
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mental health because they will lose real interaction in
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workplaces
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work places
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which resulted in depression and loneliness.
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will be
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risk
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numerous diseases which
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appears
appeared
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appear
due to lack of movement.
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,
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rate raised
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two years because
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at houses due to the corona
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pandemic
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pandemic
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encouraging
incouraging
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encouraging
online workers to practice
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outdoor
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sports and join social clubs.
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remedy makes
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working from
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an ambition that most
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people
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the people
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want to reach. To conclude, doing your
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from
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is
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sword but with some control
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our
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we can make it a huge benefit.
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