People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Sedentary lifestyles and unhealthy meals are being ubitiqeous nowadays which are resulting in deleterious diseases in some individuals.

Therefore

, an extra payment for

health

service is necessarily required for those who suffered a sickness due to poor diets and bad

lifestyle

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thought.

However

, I strongly agree that ill people cannot be taken care

unless

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they cover additional costs to the

health

center

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. I believe there are several reasons

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be clarified behind why some ill citizens ought to make more payments to

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First

and foremost, lack of exercise is a primary reason. To illustrate

this

point, people do not take enough exercises or physical activity on the daily basis.

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is mainly because

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technology has become

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part of life.

In other words

, Children and adults use technological devices almost every day.

For instance

, playing video games and checking social networking updates.

Consequently

, they have become unhealthier and less active.

However

, it is extremely vital because it strengthens our immune system which

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our bodies from short-term or long-term disease. Without exercising, our organisms cannot be capable to attack harmful bacteria which deteriorates our

health

and cause us infection.

In addition

to that, I am convinced that a lack of diet

also

damages human overall

health

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. People are infectious since numerous fast

foods

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outlets are recently prevalent

in

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everywhere. Take,

For example

, consuming a lot of junk dishes, like burgers, chips, and soft drinks lead to serious

health

issues.

Besides

that, processed foods from markets are excessively eaten which contain a large

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of additives, saturated fats, and sugars. Obesity and diabetes are the most common diseases in recent days.

Hence

, those mainly affect our bodies adversely.

Therefore

,

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who do not concern about their

health

must pay a huge sum of money so that doctors can treat them as well provide

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a great facility. In conclusion, I completely accept that sick individuals who are constantly relying on cuisine from restaurants,

such

as junk food and food additives and do not exercise regularly should be

additionally

paid to the hospital. In order to appreciate what they pay for and start to adopt a healthy routine by doing effective sports or physical movement to prevent getting severe

health

problems and eating nutritional and well-balanced dishes.