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Band 7.5

You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, give details of the ad that you want to publish mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say how you would like to pay for the advertisement

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request you to publish an
advertisement
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 related to renting an apartment to a family in your esteemed newspaper in the next edition. I live in the North Street of Jalandhar and have a spare small apartment just next to my residence. I would like to rent it out to a family for a
three year
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three-year
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of
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apply
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lease agreement.
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this
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 residence is less spacious and consists of one bedroom with an attached washroom, a kitchen and a small lobby, the front garden makes it appealing to live in. I request you to publish
this
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advertisement
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 on the front page, for
this
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 section may likely be noticed by more readers. It would assist me in getting more clients and give me more options to select the suitable one. I would like to discuss the mode of payment and the total cost of it. I appreciate
if
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it if
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 I could pay online for
this
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advertisement
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. Kindly revert me soon at [email protected] to discuss the format of the
advertisement
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 and the payment. I am expecting a prompt response. Yours faithfully, Amandeep Kaur

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language use
Ensure consistency in tense usage. For instance, "I appreciate if I could pay online" should be "I would appreciate it if I could pay online."
content
Include your contact number for a quicker response from the newspaper editor.
structure
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
style
The tone is polite and formal, which is appropriate for this context.
content
The task has been fully addressed, including necessary details about the apartment and clear instructions for the advertisement.
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