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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals support the idea that a
person
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's
culture
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 is defined by their native
country
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, while others believe that
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 factor has a small
influence
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. I totally agree with the
first
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 group of people, because individuals in different parts of the world have different religions and
history
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, which are the main factors in a
person
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’s
culture
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. On the one hand, in the
last
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 decades cultures in different parts of the world are becoming more and more similar,
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happens due to globalization. Western
culture
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 has a significant
influence
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 on other countries. Members of society in different regions of the world watch the same shows and films, which formalize us and make us more similar to each other.
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, a
person
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 from Europe has similar interests as an individual from Australia. According to
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, parents in different
states
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 upbringing children in the same way, so a
person
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's
culture
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 has minor differences.
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, these factors support
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 growing popularity of streaming platforms
such
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 as Netflix, which produces
their
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its
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 products across a majority of
states
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.
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, not only our spare time has an
influence
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 on our habits. The history and religious background of the
country
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have
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 an effect on a
person
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’s
culture
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.
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, in some
states
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 of the United
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states
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 evolution theory has been banned from the school education programme
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 because it conflicts with local religion. In other cases traditions have a massive impact on our
culture
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. In Muslim
countries
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 girls and boys ought to study in different schools according to their gender. All these small details have influenced a
person
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's habits in a massive way, so the native
country
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 has a big
influence
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 on our minds. In conclusion, the main factor, which makes us similar is globalization, so in some
cases
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 local
culture
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 has a minor power on members of the public.
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, religion and the history of the
country
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 formalize our habits in different ways.

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