It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishments' is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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Teaching
children
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to distinguish right and wrong is one of the most important and
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difficult tasks of parenting.
Children
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should get familiar with ethics and principles at a young age when their character is getting shaped. Some parents believe that
punishment
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helps to prevent
children
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from wrongdoing.
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essay is an attempt to express my opposing view about
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notion and an explanation of what can be done to encourage kids to good
behaviour
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. To start with, physical
punishment
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has negative effects on kids' character and mental health.
Punishment
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has been linked to anxiety, depression and antisocial behaviours.
Punishment
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has been known as one of the important reasons for anxiety in
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other factors like being abused or neglected. Researchers believe that the negative impact of
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remains in a person's mind in adulthood as well.
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,
punishment
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often fails to deter youngsters from doing unpleasant things. Actually, it does not teach good
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or the reason for it.
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, it makes the
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angry. It directs the
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's attention to their own suffering and resentment rather than how their unwanted
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can affect others​. In order to encourage
children
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to behave properly, parents and teachers can withdraw the
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's privileges so that he or she tries to compensate for the mistakes.
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, Parents can reduce their pocket money or postpone taking them to the playground until they find out they did something unpleasant.
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, penalties can be more effective when they are related to the action that has been done.
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, picking up the rubbish they have dropped, cleaning up the graphite they have drawn and apologising to someone they have hurt. In
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,way we can arise feelings of responsibility in the
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that is
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more likely to lead to good
behaviour
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in future rather than physical
punishment
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. To conclude, violence should not be used against
children
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to stop them from doing antisocial actions as not only it harms their body and mind's health but
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it will not work out. And they may suffer its ill effects in future as well.
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, other methods should be used to solve the problem.
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