Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is a matter of debate that a group of people who support adolescents have to be available to do unpaid

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for the

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in their leisure

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. from that perspective younger youth get an advantage as well as the

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. I strongly support and agree with

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in the ensuing paragraphs. To commence with support, it can be explained that when younger

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meet new people who are elder than them

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ideas of thoughts get exchanged with them. That's why career-related and the experience as they gain valuable information which helps in the future. ,

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moreover

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if elderly people

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in a multinational company, so

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that group of teens get references for finding a job.

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, the other view to prove my point is that

children

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learn

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management in their life that how all

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to do on

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. That's why

that teenagers

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becomes responsible in their family, it will help them. apart from that if a scholar child

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poor

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in the terms of academic

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community

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get improved.

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year my scholar friend went to a rural area and taught all poor

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throughout

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one year. So eventually all weak students got cleared the board examination due to my friend. So

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is the way the

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will develop. Overall, to conclude with the discussion and it can be said that if younger youth do

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for the

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without taking any money. So definitely the city can improve and at the same

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these adolescents gain different experiences, learn communication skills and so on.