A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Tim, I’m writing

this

letter to you to introduce something about some details that you take care of my

house

and pet.

Firstly

, thank you for your help that you agree me to look after my

house

. You know, I’ll travel to Canada

about

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2 weeks on my holiday. I wish you can live in my

house

until I back. During

this

time, if you have any problem you can

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contact

connect

contect

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contact

with my parents, their phone number is 999999. My cat, Kitty is very shy, she

likes

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tolikes

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stay under the bed unless eating time, so that you don’t worry about where she is. One thing

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that is

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important

that

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is that

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you should change the sand

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off

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her

garbege

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garbage

garage

everyday

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every day

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. According to my

house

, there are some small duties. There is a smoke fan within the

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microwave

mircowave

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microwave

, please open it when you cooking. The washing machine is in the multifunction room, please close the light when you finish

use

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it. The

last

thing is the blue bin is for recycling

garbege

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garbage

and each Tuesday you should put it on the pavement before 7:00 am. I will take some gifts for you, thank you for your help. Best regards, Kevin

Submitted by kevin. B on Thu Nov 03 2022

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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