Your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for one thing. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – What do you like about the uniform? – What don’t you like about the uniform? – Make suggestions how to improve the uniform.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to present my opinion about our new uniforms. They are exceptional and
employees
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in the company will definitely look fantastic. The best part of the outfit is the shirt. Personally, I love the colour of it and the texture of the material is
also
great.
Moreover
, shoes are very comfortable and if I could, I would wear them on the street. 
Nevertheless
, there is one part of the uniform, I am not satisfied with. Trousers are made of material, which is too thick,
therefore
it is inconvenient to wear them in the summer. People in the company are getting sweaty,
consequently
, they are not sufficient enough at work, because they cannot focus on tasks. If I were you, I would try to return those pants to the store and purchase something more
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to the weather outside. I am hoping for a quick resolution to the matter. Best regards, Paula M
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