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a discursive essay : fast food is to blame for rising levels of obesity.

#food #levels #obesity
Fast food is influenced by being fat. Yeah, I agree with
this
 essay.
This
 opinion said about fast
feed
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 is good for our bodies.
First
 of all, eating a fast meal is unhealthy for us to have a healthy lifestyle. Fast-food name foods which are marked as fast as possible to eat.
That is
 so harmful to our mind and being fat for a long time.
For example
, pizza and sandwiches are cooked with bacon, a
lot
 of cheese, sauce and sausage. We know these are too bad things.
Second
 of all, nowadays, we see a
lot
 of people around the world who like
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cook fast cooking during
a
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the
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 week. I do not disagree with
this
 opinion which is not delicious. We should accept them to see around us.
For instance
 , french fries and chicken fries are so yummy with a
lot
 of sauce and bread. Can you think them how they are tasty? Oh My God, I can't believe them. Teenagers and children are two groups of people who like a
lot
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 and appreciate tasting some new recipes and new foods from whole the world. These days, fast food is so unsound for our bodies and for
next
 future of our minds. So we have to manage our food during the week,
also
 a day.
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