Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Globalism is judged for creating a world of unique cultures and destroying national identity. In fact, there are many reasons for
people
support these ideas, but in my opinion, it is unreal.
Actually, that's true many people
travel around the world each day as tourists and they usually propagate their culture and religion to local individuals, but, in my view, it's not enough for changing cultural beliefs. For example
, my wife and I have been to Canada
to visit our friends and there we had the opportunity to enjoy a new years celebration where we met people
from several countries. As a consequence, curious conversations show up and we research many subjects about it on the internet. On the other hand
, we've kept believing in our own beliefs.
On the otherwise
, Canada
is a large country in the North American territory, and it is common to meet people
from many nationalities such
as Japan, China, India, Brazil and so. Indeed, many students choose this
country to improve their skills by applying to the immigration process. Although
many people
from many places are living together in the same space, Canada
hasn't changed, and immigrants and citizens have been living well and building a wonderful society for living in. To support it, there is an article written by a Canadian journalist which proves that immigrants love so much Canada
Day, and they chose the Canada
Day holiday as the best holiday to enjoy with their family and friends.
In conclusion, the world is changing and society and authorities must accept these changes to live better.Submitted by murilo.siqueira2012 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite