Your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for one thing. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – What do you like about the uniform? – What don’t you like about the uniform? – Make suggestions how to improve the uniform.

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Dear Sir, My name is Gurmit Singh. I am writing

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letter to draw your immediate attention toward the pros and cons of our new working dress. Since I received the new uniform for our company I am feeling more comfortable in my work and it

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seems tremendous in safety aspects.

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, I and my colleague are disappointed due to the tiny size as well as the few numbers of

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in the trousers. Similar to our old dress, it is challenging to carry a number of tools with us.

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, having more

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helps us in our work.

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, I will suggest you please discuss with the designer to increase

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on the left side of the uniform and the size will be more than the current size of the

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. I wish you will take the necessary action to resolve the dilemma. I am looking forward to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully

gurmit.150Thu Nov 03 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

155 words

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