some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. but others think that taking part in individual game is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Individuals think that it is more
advantages
to participate in Replace the word
advantageous
games
Use synonyms
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
played
Add a missing verb
are played
in
Change preposition
by
Use synonyms
team
, like Add an article
the team
a team
cricket
. others whilst think that taking Use synonyms
part
in Use synonyms
Game
which contain only one person, Use synonyms
such
as badminton. Linking Words
In
Change preposition
This
this
should discuss both sides and your Linking Words
person
point of view.
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personal
To begin
with, some Linking Words
people
think that it is more Use synonyms
to
beneficial to Change preposition
apply
part
in Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
a
game
Use synonyms
which
Change preposition
in which
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
team
members, Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
football
. Change preposition
as football
Firstly
, it Linking Words
help
to learn Change the verb form
helps
the
teamwork together. Correct article usage
apply
In other words
, A Linking Words
game
which Use synonyms
contain
Change the verb form
contains
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team
does provide the lesson of teamwork and how to play together in one unit. Correct article usage
a team
For instance
, when I start playing Linking Words
cricket
, so I play selfish Use synonyms
cricket
for Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
myself
myseft
, but it does not give benefits. now I learn from Correct your spelling
myself
cricket
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that
how to play as teamwork together. Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
, There are more impact Linking Words
positive
Fix the agreement mistake
positives
of
playing in Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
Add an article
the team
a team
team
Fix the agreement mistake
teams
such
as football. Linking Words
people
learn that as Use synonyms
Use synonyms
team mates
how to sacrifice your position for others. it is not easy to Correct your spelling
teammates
do
give your place to your Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
teammates
team mates
. Correct your spelling
teammates
For example
, when I play Linking Words
cricket
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in
my cousin , I always Change preposition
with
love
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tolove
do
opening, but when I start playing Unnecessary verb
apply
on
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at
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a nation
nation
level. Used to sacrifice my position for Replace the word
national
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team
because beneficial.
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the team
a team
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
that taking Use synonyms
part
in Use synonyms
individual
Add an article
an individual
Use synonyms
game
is better Fix the agreement mistake
games
such
as swimming. Linking Words
secondly
, it Linking Words
help
to gain your Change the verb form
helps
confidence
level on the big stages. Use synonyms
In other words
, sports Linking Words
gives
the experience that Correct subject-verb agreement
give
does
not have to panic Correct pronoun usage
one does
on
Change preposition
at
crucial
stage of life. Correct article usage
a crucial
For instance
, In 1930 Pakistan, Linking Words
player
are effective by the lack of Fix the agreement mistake
players
confidence
, but they start taking Use synonyms
part
in Use synonyms
individual
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an individual
the individual
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game
. it Fix the agreement mistake
games
help
them to gain Change the verb form
helps
confidence
. Use synonyms
furthermore
, I would like to outline one more major impact of playing individual Linking Words
games
. it will Use synonyms
also
develop their communication skill with different Linking Words
people
. Use synonyms
In other words
, it Linking Words
give
benefitsChange the verb form
gives
in
daily Change preposition
apply
for
talking to different Change preposition
apply
people
.
Use synonyms
Lastly
, some Linking Words
people
think that it is more beneficial participate to Use synonyms
Use synonyms
games
which are played in Change preposition
in games
Use synonyms
Add an article
the game
a game
game
Fix the agreement mistake
games
such
as football but Linking Words
other
believe that it is ideal to take Fix the agreement mistake
others
part
in Use synonyms
individual
Add an article
the individual
an individual
Use synonyms
game
Fix the agreement mistake
games
such
as swimming. In my opinion, Individuals Linking Words
games
are more beneficial rather than Use synonyms
team
Use synonyms
games
because Use synonyms
it
help us to gain Correct pronoun usage
they
the
Correct article usage
apply
confidence
level and develop Use synonyms
the
communication skills.Correct article usage
apply
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