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Nowadays there is more and more competition between older and younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this create? How can they be solved?

#competition #people #jobs #create
Without any doubt, the situation is highly critical as a crash is generated between older and younger
people
.
Although
, a lot of problems are there yet some sensible solutions are
also
 available.
This
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parameters
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 responsible for
this
 phenomenon along with some measures to curb the issue. To commence with, there are myriad things to be shared to manifest how older
people
 are getting high levels of stress ,just because of the
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newcomers
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new comers
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 in their job fields. The mammoth conspicuous reason is that
young
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the young
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 generation
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 more knowledge of technology as compared to
older
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 ones.
Consiquently
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Consequently
, new
commers
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comers
 are overpowering the old ones.
This
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 towards restlessness among older
people
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Moreover
,
older
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generation
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generation
have
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 more experience but owing to the lack of technological knowledge, they feel ashamed .
For
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 a survey was conducted by
a news channels
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news channels
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 which
unearthen
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unearthed
unearthing
 the fact that 80% of older
people
, working in different industries are found unaware of many new technologies.
Thus
, the stress and unrest among old
people
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 due to just because they are not updated. Moving
further
 to the conception, a number of things can be done at different levels.
First
 and foremost, there must be some seminars or
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 to update the skills of older workers.
Secondly
, if both types of
people
 work parallel, outcomes may be
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wonderful
wonderfully
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wonderful
.To be more specific, if young
people
 work with old ones, they will be
benifited
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benefited
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 the experience of the older
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 along with that the older will learn technology from new
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comers
. To recapitulate,
although
 there are
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a
sa
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 lot of problems among older and younger generations yet if Organized in a proper manner, they can be
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beneficial
benificial
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beneficial
 for each other.
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