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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter … tell your friend about the job …what sort of work it involves …say why you think the job would be suitable for him …explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows Dear….,

#friend #job #country #company #…what #sort #work #…say #…explain #address #dear…
Dear..., I know you have trouble making a living in my country so I am writing to tell you about the job I think will be the most suitable for you. Both of us know about the pandemic which is happening right now.
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 is why being a website developer, a game developer, or any business involving computer science that you can think of is frequent for the time being. Of course, from the name, it involves programming, and each game or website will require different computer languages: JavaScript, C++, C#, Python, etc. I have been your friend for as long as I can remember and I know you like programming so I have a feeling that you would absolutely love being a programmer. I
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 know you need money to pay off your debts and the career pays really well with the lowest amount being 3500 dollars a month and the highest amount being 8000 dollars a month which is why I think it would be a suitable job for you. Applying for the career is easy, all you have to do is call these numbers XXX-XXXX and XXX-XXXX. They absolutely would love to have you, I know you're an open person and I know they accept people easily, as long as you show how capable you are, I know they will accept you. I hope you can make a living here. Best Regards, Rome.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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