Introduction
In modern society, adults tend to push their kids to try hard in order to achieve their goals. In
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I will examine the advantages and disadvantages of encouraging children to work hard for their dreams and I will provide some examples.Add a comma
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Body paragraph 1
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To begin
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coach when he was a teenager, who always pushed him to do more repetitions than others in order to become a champion in basketball. Linking Words
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, when parents encourage their sons to overcome a challenge, the confidenceLinking Words
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attitude towards children has an important problem. From my personal experience, I've learned that the role of a parent is always appreciating his kid and may be dangerous for the mental health of children by putting too much pressure on their shoulders. Sometimes an adult can have too many expectations about the kid's results and Linking Words
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can damage his relationship with him. A clear example of Linking Words
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is one of my friends who was very good at soccer, but due to the fact ofLinking Words
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Conclusion
To conclude,
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attitude can boost their confidence and help them achieve their goals.Linking Words