You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to advise you that the crime TV dramas which are

broadcasted

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broadcast

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on your channel in the morning should be shown at some other time of the

day

. Morning is the new beginning of the

day

and

human

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the human

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mind is fresh and at peace.

Therefore

, it is an inappropriate time for these

type

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types

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of TV shows. Explaining

further

, people start afresh in the morning and get ready to leave for work. It is a perfect time to start a

day

with

postive

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positive

thinking and good vibes. In my opinion, motivational programmes which

improves

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the mood and encourage the person for

happy

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the happy

a happy

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and cheerful

day

should be telecasted during the

intital

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initial

hours of the

day

. Crime shows are important and cannot be neglected, as

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they

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aware

individual

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individuals

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to be

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apply

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safe and secure at home and in

the

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apply

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public. But, it makes the

day

gloomy and

depressed

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, making the person feel irritated and negative

throught out

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throughout

the

day

. I hope you will consider my feedback and will make

necessary

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the necessary

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changes to the order of shows being aired on your channel, keeping in my the experience of your esteemed viewers. Yours faithfully, JK

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task response

Be more specific about the type of violence shown in the program to strengthen your argument.

task response

Avoid minor grammatical errors, such as 'broadcasted' instead of 'broadcast', for higher accuracy.

coherence and cohesion

Use more varied sentence structures to enhance the flow of the letter.

task response

The letter clearly explains the issue and provides a strong reason for the complaint.

suitable writing tone

The tone is polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

logical structure

The paragraphs are logically structured, making the letter easy to follow.

single idea per paragraph

A separate paragraph introduces each main point, helping to keep the ideas organized.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

196 words

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