It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Strict punishment is essential for
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children
at a small age to learn about what is correct and what is not. I vote for
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notion to a major extent. There can be many types of retribution as physical, mental, and sometimes social, which help educators and parents to use to teach their
children
how to
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in public. My preference is justified in the forthcoming paragraphs with valid reasons and examples. The foremost argument for penalizing pupils at an early age is that they have no proper knowledge of bad and good things. It is important to learn them the difference between those things. If they would do something wrong, we can punish them by not allowing to meet them with their classmates.
As a result
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feel alone and quickly understand their mistakes.
This
may lead that the
next
time they will think before doing the same flaw again.
For instance
, in most
schools
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universal rule that if they do not do home-work properly
then
they have to
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outside the class and they cannot be part of the lectures, which realize them to do homework regularly
otherwise
they cannot enjoy the live session with their friends.
Secondly
, if we punish the teen, it might impact their mental strength and push them to take extreme steps.
However
,
that is
not the case with a small child.
Hence
, it would be better if we impart all good manners to them while they are small. To illustrate
this
, we heard many suicidal cases in the newspapers and reports stating that due to parents' physical violence toward their teens they had taken
this
step. To avoid
this
it is good to
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at a very small age.
On the other hand
, the negative side cannot be disregarded. Teachers and parents should not
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to be more violent in order to teach their
children
.
Otherwise
, it might impact badly as no one can ever imagine. To sum up,
although
there can be some downside of violence and punishment on
children
, I believe that we can halt it by giving an appropriate and measurable punishment to
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, which really helps them in their future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Moral development
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Disciplinary methods
  • Corporal punishment
  • Psychological effects
  • Authoritative parenting
  • Permissive parenting
  • Behavioural correction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Legal frameworks
  • Cognitive development
  • Social norms
  • Character building
  • Restorative practices
  • Authoritarian approach
  • Constructive criticism
  • Pro-social behavior
  • Conditioning
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