Our health is our life so so many people intend to do some exercises or sport. What extent do you agree with this statement and give your opinion.

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It is a point of discussion whether or not, physical activities can help to gain

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sound health which leads towards a healthy life. I completely

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believe

beleive

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believe

that physical

exercise

is the key to a healthy & sound lifestyle. In

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essay, I am going to outline the

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benefits

benifits

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benefits

of gymnastic activities and how they are

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correlated

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correlated

with

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lifestyle. There are plethoras of benefits

for

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physical

exercise

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about

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its ability to increase stamina & strength. Physical

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activities

activity

activites

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activities

helps

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us to build our muscle

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strength

strenght

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strength

and enhance our power

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endurance.

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one ideal footballer like Christiano Ronaldo & an ordinary

people

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. At the age of

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strength of 19 years old and the prime mantra behind

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achievement

achivement

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achievement

is having a strict daily

exercise

routine.

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, we can say that physical

exercise

makes us healthier & stronger. At the same time, sporting activities

helps

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us to reduce our anxiety &

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the chance of being

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obese. It

avail

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our body to

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release

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stress hormones & that leads to a calm mind.

For example

, I used to play

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football

footbal

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football

after long stressful days at my university. Playing

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football

footbal

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football

helped me a lot to reduce my stress of study, which assisted me towards a better grade & happy life.

Moreover

, intensive

exercise

restrains body fat to cumulate inside our blood

vassels

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vessels

. That

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reduces

resuces

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reduces

the chance of having diseases like high blood pressure &

obeseity

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obesity

. Ulmitaley,

exercise

keeps us away from deadly diseases &

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us to enjoy a peaceful routine. To conclude, it can

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that there is no alternative

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physical

exercise

to enjoy a healthy life.

That is

why it has been said that "Health is wealth".

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