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People today are not as fit as they were in the past. What are the causes of this? What can governments do to deal with this issue?

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Most people are experiencing a drop in their physical performance compared to the past which is highly correlated with their current activities as well as their eating behaviour. Fortunately, the government has the capabilities to tackle these issues and
this
 essay will examine the problems and solutions.
First
 and foremost, folks nowadays think money is the most crucial thing in life and they are likely to allocate all of their
time
 to gain more assets from doing freelance on top of their primary job.
For example
, my aunt runs her own business on weekends and attends a
full
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time
 job during weekdays. As a consequence, she has no
time
 to exercise and her body
ache
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 easily.
Second
, despite the abundance of healthy
food
 options, today's generation prefers to eat junk
food
.
This
 is because they opined that fast
food
 is more delicious and cheaper than healthy ones.
For instance
, during lunch
break
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, employees are only given 15 minutes to eat.
As a result
, they choose
a fast
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fast food
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food
 over
more
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healthier options due to its effectiveness, regardless of its
harm
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 their body. Tackling these issues needs support from the authority.
Firstly
, the government can release a policy to enforced society to visit a gym at a certain period of
time
 and create more public open spaces for enabling people to have some physical activities with their relatives. On top of that, the central authority could create a system to discourage people from buying fast
food
 by giving higher taxes.
This
 way, an urban community will follow the rule and change their habit progressively. In conclusion, the main causes of the decline in society's fitness are their behaviour towards eating clean and earning money.
However
, there are several strategies that government could offer to address these challenges.
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