You have read a magazine article that mentioned a place you are familiar with. There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine and say What the error was Explain that you are familiar with the place Why it is important to correct the error

Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well! I am writing

this

letter in regard to a recent article that was published in Evershine magazine. I, Jack, have been following your company magazine articles for quite a long time. Recently, I came across a published article on the very famous park, Victoria in Kitchener, Ontario.

This

article has briefly described all the public spots. I must say it has each and every detail of the park.

However

, it missed to include the key part of the garden which includes the senior citizen park area. I am really familiar with

this

place, as I have been living in

this

area for about three and a half years. I shall request you to include

this

key part as

this

shall help the nearby senior people to know if they are not been aware of it. I hope my request shall be useful to the company and shall help the readers with more accurate information. Yours, Faithfully, Jack