You have read a magazine article that mentioned a place you are familiar with. There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine and say What the error was Explain that you are familiar with the place Why it is important to correct the error

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well! I am writing
this
letter in regard to a recent article that was published in Evershine magazine. I, Jack, have been following your company magazine articles for quite a long time. Recently, I came across a published article on the very famous park, Victoria in Kitchener, Ontario.
This
article has briefly described all the public spots. I must say it has each and every detail of the park.
However
, it missed to include the key part of the garden which includes the senior citizen park area. I am really familiar with
this
place, as I have been living in
this
area for about three and a half years. I shall request you to include
this
key part as
this
shall help the nearby senior people to know if they are not been aware of it. I hope my request shall be useful to the company and shall help the readers with more accurate information. Yours, Faithfully, Jack
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