Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. Therefore, it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people argue that they fail to find any relevance to their own
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they see on TV or read in the newspaper. While I accept that
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opinion appears logical, I believe that
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is a very narrow and absurd perspective, and I strongly disagree with the idea that
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has no link to people’s
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. On the one hand, some people accept that their own individual
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are not influenced by events that take place all over the world.
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may be true if they consider only
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items as the
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of celebrities, the results of football matches or the latest fashions. They claim that
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attitude does not mean they are set in their ways or behind the times. They
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that they are able to hear through the grapevine about local events that might have a bearing on their
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. Life to them,
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, can continue perfectly normally without TV or press
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coverage
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, there are several main reasons why
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point of view is notoriously misguided.
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of all, it is vital to see the big picture from national and international
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as relevant to each individual.
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, a bulletin about climate change or, very recently, the breaking
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of a plague which may affect every person on the planet.
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, from an economic perspective, financial or business sections of the newspapers carry necessary information which
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an impact on the
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of everyone. In conclusion, despite the triviality of much reporting, I completely disagree that keeping abreast of the
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is a waste of time.
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