Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The other forms of
energy
solar ,
wind
and turbine
powers
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are finding expensive to use
instead
of fossil fuel and
it's
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by-products are which are the main source of
power
in urban areas to run vehicles and industries. I completely agree with the statement because
this
form of
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energy
enegry
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energy
can be produced in limited places and usage of
this
form of
energy
is restricted to applications.
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essay will expatiate
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further
in the following paragraphs. Solar
power
and
wind
energies
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can be produced only countryside side.
This
is demanding more empty space to store solar
power
in batteries. On the other ,hand
wind
is possible only in open filed where we can expect more
wind
to move fans and turbine
power
can be produced only on irrigation projects.
For example
in ,Canada it is impossible to rely on
wind
or solar
energy
because there 7 months of no proper sunning and
wind
,
thus
it is impossible to expect
energy
in
such
places,
hence
I advocate that fossil fuels are
a
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more reliable
energy
. ,
Furthermore
energy
which is produced other than fossil fuels
are
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less reliable to use it is
need less
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to mention that we can drive a car with solar-charged batteries for several miles. ,
Additionally
life
tme
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time
me
the
of
this
energy
is very less compared to Fuel
energy
.we can use Solar
power
to
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kitchens and houses but not suitable for running industries or vehicles.
Thus
I believe that Petrol and gas are more reliable
energy
in
this
current epoch. In conclusion, Despite Solar and
wind
power
appear
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to be cheap and easily accessible but in ,
the
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reality it is expensive to store and limited lifetime.
hence
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believe fossil fuels are the best viable option.
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