Zoos should be banned because it is cruel to keep wild animals in captivity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Zoos have always been very popular,

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, with children.

However

, it is important to understand that these

animals

are treated in lousy conditions harming as well psychologically and physically. I disagree with the closest zoo for the following reasons, The zoo can be used in the education and learning process, very few people and cities win with the zoological and I believe that

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there are

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necessary laws and fiscality about the mistreatment of

animals

.

Firstly

, closed of zoological can be harmful to every place the education of leisure of children

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apply

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that they can learn about

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apply

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animals

and know in practice the

characteristic

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characteristics

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of

animals

,

for example

, can be shown in biology, between other.

Second,

I believe that, if have good fiscality of care of the

animals

, and responsibility for mistreatment and in

this

case, closing these places, the zoological can work out no harm to

animals

.

For example

, in Costa Rica the zoo was closed because of the mistreatment of the

animals

and after regularization can open and work out usually for the leisure of the society. thirsty, zoology is responsible for many jobs in a city and is often the main source and income.

furthermore

, the

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can cause much harm to the city and decrease the income of the population. In conclusion, in my point of view, closing zoology can be harmful to the education of children, and the income in the city,

therefore

, I believe that

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there

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needs to be laws and fiscality to avoid harm to the

animals

and the population.