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Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

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With the advent of convenient texting
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 and SNS
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, more and more
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 write sentences in a casual form. Nowadays,
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 have gotten used to sending messages or making comments by using informal language.
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 a trend is significant, especially among young students who spend more time on
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. Admitting
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 a tendency, some
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 are concerned about the drawback of expansion of relaxed writing
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 and losing skills of formal writing. According to a survey by Tokyo university, the percentage of use of "Keigo", a formal style of writing in Japan, is sharply dropping in online
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, because, Keigo is not familiar to young
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, and they are not able to use it. A similar situation can be seen in the workplace. One of the major economic newspapers mentioned, recently, the number of supervisors found that their newly-hired employees cannot write even business emails in the correct form.
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, many corporations are forced to set a seminar on formal writing
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, the benefits of casual writing are
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 focused on these days. Casual writing established a new form of literature,
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 as light novels, which is one of the most popular genres for teenagers to elderly
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 now. The publishment of some best-seller light novels has encouraged
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 to open books more frequently.
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, relax-style writing enhances communication among
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. thanks to casual writing, we can send messages instantly. Convenient text-style communication enabled us to catch up more often. In summary, develop,ent of certain digital
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 had changed our way of writing, more casually.
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, there are both benefits and negative sides to the informal use of writing, and it is important to consider the effects
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 both sides.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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